English Task
Good morning everyone and HAPPY FRIDAY! 🙂
I hope you have had a good week. Well done for working hard on all of your home learning tasks this week. I have been working at the school hub all week, but I’ve really enjoyed reading your fantastic work in the evenings. Great effort!
It was also so nice to chat to many of you on the phone this week, I am glad you are all keeping well.
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Yesterday you began writing your Guinness World Record entries.
Click HERE for a printable version of this task
Lots of you made a great start writing your first paragraph!
Today’s English focus is:
Published Writing
Today is an opportunity to finish off your writing from yesterday (if you haven’t already).
Once you have completed your writing, edit your work.
Proofreading and Editing your writing
-Read your work and check it makes sense
-Correct spelling mistakes
-Correct missing punctuation
Once you have edited your work, write your final draft in your best handwriting with all of the corrections.
Then, write your first name on your work and upload a photo of it. I will add it to the gallery, where I can give you feedback.
You can upload your work here or email the office.
I look forward to reading your amazing finished pieces!
Challenge
If you could achieve a Guinness World Record, what would it be for?!
Write your ideas on the blog!
If I had a Guinness record I would be who could type on the computer the quickest and I would win because my favourite thing to do, and I like tapping on the buttons because it’s so satisfying!
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Well done Reuben on publishing your finished piece of writing. You have structured your work clearly by using paragraphs. Don’t forget that we are writing as if the school has achieved a new Guinness World Record.
Hi miss I’ve checked my punctuation,my grammar and accuracy. I sended my full piece of writing yesterday I hope you you liked it
Well done Chloe K for your published writing! Your handwriting is lovely and neat. You have explained the event well!
For your first sentence in paragraph 2, just remember we are writing as if the school have just set a new world record.
Good effort!
My Guinness world record would be Who’s the best at gymnastics because it’s relaxing and it’s good to stretch your legs and arms. Also, another thing I think why it could be a world record because I’m really flexible and I do it quite often.
If I was in the Guinness World Records I would be the girl who jumps the highest because I love jumping up and down I could even jump
7 m up !?
If I worked at NASA* this would be my world record attempt.
PRANK–X–931
This model is the first of its kind and will have more pranks and gadgets than any other robot in the world – or off the world!
PRANK–X–931 has 104 built in pranks and gadgets including a whoopy cushion in its metallic bottom, nail polish ( clear ) and 102 more! It took 94 days to make but, impressively, it made 101 of them work the first time. It is at NASA* so when humans go to Mars we can still have joy out of our home. Earth.
*National Aeronautics and Space Administration
Hello Miss Jones
If I could achieve something in the Guinness world records it would be driving a car faster than the speed of light because I LOVE CARS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
If I was in the Guinness World Records I would be the best athlete because I am very good at doing long distances I ran 4 times around the hub non-stop in 20 minutes!
Well done on completing the challenge everyone, it is very interesting to find out what Guinness World Record you would like to achieve!
Don’t forget to publish yesterdays writing! You can send a picture of it too 🙂
If I had a Guinness World record it would be for the best movie because I have a very good sense of humour to make the film/ movie great and I watch a lot of films, movies and episodes.
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Well done Clemence for publishing your work! You have sequenced the events clearly 🙂 Don’t forget to use joined handwriting!
Hello Miss Jones
I have sent my homework to you.
Have a lovely weekend.
For the challenge I would like to train a pig to do the most tricks in a minute as the current record is 13!
Well done Orla, I have just read through your writing! I like how you included important rules about the exact fillings for the sandwiches! Well done for including key parts.
How did I know your Guinness World Record idea would involve pigs! Your favourite animal!
Well done Sebastian for publishing your writing! I like your idea about the Blu tack record! Great effort for trying to join your handwriting!
Excellent effort Matthias, your handwriting has improved greatly, well done. You have a clear structure to your writing and have presented it well 🙂
Hello Miss Jones.
My Guinness World record would be for gymnastic because I have been practising for years and I am very good at it now. I can do perfect cartwheel ?‍♂️, stand on my hands, walk on beam and make flips on it as well.
If I had to guess the world record it will be gymnastics because I am flexible and I like gymnastics. I want to be famous even
I would like to break the world record by driving the highest and fastest plane in the world. I would also like to break the record by being the fastest tennis player in the world.
Great ideas Chloe, Gabriella and Graceanne! 🙂
Well done Celestine for publishing your writing. You have sequenced it clearly and I like how you added important details like the children having to check each sandwich was filled correctly so it was acceptable! 🙂
Brilliant effort Karolina, your spelling is super! Well done.
You have set your work out clearly and included important parts in your writing. I love your sentence ‘the children screamed with happiness!’
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Well done Jiana! You have described the event well, I like how your described that it was too warm because people were moving too fast! Remember to check over and correct punctuation.