Good morning Year 1! I was very pleased to see so many of you write lots yesterday!
Today you will finish your writing if you haven’t already done so. You can take a picture of your writing, or type it into the box (if your fingers don’t get too tired)!
A reminder of your writing task:
You can look back at yesterday’s blog if you need reminding of what to include.
I have started placing pictures of your writing in a gallery which you will be able to see – thank you to all of you who have sent photos in so far.
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If you have finished your writing, think about these things and remember to read back your work!
1. Have I read back my sentences to check that they make sense?
2. Have I used capital letters and full stops?
3. Have I used adjectives to describe my feelings and how Zeraffa looks?
4. Have I used my sounds?
Well done everyone for another brilliant week of learning! Have a lovely rest and ready to learn again on Monday.
I did some reasearch of on the best beaches in France
Well done on your brilliant writing! I loved reading it. Your handwriting is beautiful!
Well done and thank you everyone who has sent in your writing so far! I have loved reading each letter!
200 Pink Dress Street
Paris
002221111
30th April 2020
Dear Zeraffa Giraffa,
I think you are taller than the trees! I saw you in the French streets and you were eating leaves. I think you are beautiful. I have never seen an animal with a neck as long as yours.
Africa is very very far. How can you walk so far? Were you looked after and cared for well? Me and my friend have seen the Eiffel Tower. Do you like France?
I love you. Please reply to my letter.
Love from,
Flavia
Dear Miss Travers.
I have written my letter in my yellow book and emailed you the photo.
Thank you.
Well done I will put it up!
Hello Miss Travers,
I wrote the letter to Zeraffa Giraffa and my mother sent you a picture.
Well done Fabi, I am looking forward to reading it!
12 Saint-Cloud
Paris, 75009
Dear Ziraffa giraffa,
I am writing to tell you about how amazed I was when I saw you walking down the street. You are so beautiful. Do you like the leaves you were eating in France? Such a black tongue you have. I hope you like France but I hope you don’t miss your family.
Love Eden
Well done Eden! I like the adjectives you have used (beautiful and black). It is good you have asked her questions too and used a question mark!
I improved my letter and wrote it out again. I also drew some patterns on it!
Well done Jay! Great that you have used your learning in Maths also!
Mateus – a brilliant letter!
I like the adjectives you have used (beautiful and enormous)! You have also used capital letters, full stops and question marks!
Isabella – a great letter – you have even used paragraphs!
I like that you have used adjectives to describe the giraffe and you have also done some research on giraffes to include in your own letter! Brilliant! Well done!
Renee- another brilliant letter! You have used full stops and capital letters, as well as lots of questions. You have suggested lots of places for to visit too. I enjoyed reading it!
Auguste – well done I loved reading your letter! I think the adjectives to describe Zeraffa are brilliant. I also like the picture!
Basile – a great letter! I like that you used the word amazed to describe how you were feeling! You have used question marks well too! Well done!
Jaidee- excellent letter with lots of different punctuation and adjectives! I like that you included some questions too!
Clemence- I loved reading your letter. Brilliant adjectives and you have thought about your sentences before writing them down. Beautiful handwriting!
Gabrielle – Brilliant letter with lots of adjectives too! Well done for thinking about your sentence before writing. I liked all of the recommendations!
A brilliant letter Louise! I like that you have used the word amazed to describe how you felt when you saw her!
A well structured letter!
Camila – I loved reading your letter! It was full of description and lots of different punctuation like full stops, capital letters and question marks! Well done! I hope Zeraffa likes the picture.