Good morning Year 1!

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14th May 2020 English printable

Today I would like you to start your writing and send me a picture or write it in the comments box if your fingers don’t get too tired!

First have a read of the story again:
Acorn wood book printable version

This is your writing activity for today:

When you write instructions you have to use command sentences. These are sometimes called bossy verbs. They tell people what to do!

Stop it!

Walk faster!

Close the door!

Watch this video to help you learn more.

When you write instructions, you use command sentences or bossy verbs. 

Thank you to all of those who have sent in your English writing so far, I will put your pictures up tomorrow in the Published writing blog. 

 

36 comments on “14.5.20 Writing

  1. Good morning Miss Travers, 14th May

    This is how we play the Golden River game.
    First you choose someone to be in the middle.
    Then everyone aks the question ‘can we cross the golden river?’
    Next the person in the middle answers if you are wearing blue for my example.
    Then whoever is wearing blue has to run fast without the person getting you!

    Remember you will need lots of space!
    Remember do not cheat!

  2. Miss Travers says:

    Well done Jacob! Great that you have used bossy verbs! You have also used exclamation marks and question marks too!

  3. Gabrielle says:

    Good morning Miss Travers,

    This is how you play “what’s in the box?”. First, put ten objects in the box! Remember to pick ten very different objects. Then go in a circle! Ask someone to knock on the box. After, ask her or him to pick a toy in the box. Finally, ask your friend to guess what the object is. Remember that the one who picked the object at the beginning cannot be the one who guesses during the game, otherwise it is too easy! This game is even funnier when you have more people playing.

  4. Miss Travers says:

    Super writing Gabrielle! Well done! Well done for using bossy verbs and lots of punctuation!

  5. Jaidee ? says:

    Good morning Miss Travers!

    This is how you play Golden river.
    First, one will be the farmer and the others all stand in a line on one side of the playground. Then, they all chant, “Farmer Farmer ??‍? can we cross the golden river? The farmer ??‍? will reply, for example, “only if you’re something pink”. After that, those who fit the description are allowed to walk across to the other side. The farmer then tries to catch the others who have to run across. Remember to run ??‍♀️ as fast as you can. Anyone who is caught joins the farmer ??‍?.

  6. Miss Travers says:

    Super writing! You have used bossy verbs and speech too! Well done!

  7. Hello Miss Travers,

    This is how you play hide and seek.

    First you pick someone to count, they cover their eyes. They are the seeker.
    Then everyone hides.
    After the seeker comes to find everyone!
    Finally the seeker finds someone and they become the next seeker.
    The last person found is the winner!

    Remember you need to find a good place to hide!
    Remember you can’t look when you are counting!

  8. Miss Travers says:

    Well done Saoirse! Excellent work – you have used bossy verbs and lots of different punctuation!

  9. Good morning Miss Travers,

    Instructions for Stuck in the Mud

    First, who is the tagger?
    Then, run to the bird nest and the tagger needs to tag you.
    Then, if they tag you, stand still and put your arms out.
    After your friend touches you, you can go.
    Finally, if everyone is tagged then the tagger wins!

    Remember you can’t move when the tagger tags you.
    Remember you need to not get caught!

  10. Miss Travers says:

    Well done Flavia – you have used question marks, exclamation marks and lots of bossy verbs!

  11. Miss Travers says:

    Well done everyone! I am enjoying reading your instruction writing so far!
    If you finish all your tasks, have a look at this website post for our new video:
    https://www.stvincentsprimary.org.uk/news/hold-still-2020/
    Send your photos in to Mrs Avdiu or Miss Coleman.

  12. Clémence says:

    Good morning Miss Travers,
    Here are my instructions for the elastic game:

    First, you cut 3 m of elastic and you make a knot.
    Then, two people put it on their ankles and move aside.
    After, a third person jumps on top of the elastic doing different figures.
    Finally, when she finishes her go,she switches places with a person holding the elastic.
    Remember you can’t step on it!

  13. Miss Travers says:

    Well done Clemence! You have used lots of punctuation and bossy verbs!

  14. This is how we play 1, 2, 3, sunshine!

    First, we find a tree.
    Then, we choose someone who stands in front of the tree and does not look behind.
    Then the others have to stand together a few meters away from the tree.
    Once everyone is ready, the person near the tree says 1, 2, 3, sunshine and while the person near the tree says 1, 2, 3, sunshine the other persons have to move.
    After, when the porson near the tree turns and look at you, you need to freeze before the counter sees you moving. Don’t move!
    If he sees you move, you have to go back to the start.
    Finally, if you reach the tree, it is your turn to be in front of the tree.
    Remember you need to not move.

    Remember you can’t cheat.

  15. Miss Travers says:

    Excellent writing! I enjoyed reading this. Well done for using bossy verbs and lots of punctuation!

  16. Good morning Miss Travers,
    My instructions to hide and seek game :
    First you have to ask you friends -Would you like to play?
    Then you tell them to hide.
    After you count to ten or twenty.
    Finally you try and find them.
    Remember you need to hide.
    Remember you can’t cheat
    Let’s go!

  17. Miss Travers says:

    Well done for using bossy verbs and lots of punctuation, Harry!

  18. Good morning miss travers,

    This is how you play badminton.
    First,there should be 2 players on a badminton ? court.Then,one player on each side.After,you need to hit the shuttle ? with your racket ? so that it passes over the net and lands inside your Opponent.Finally you need to win enough rallies,and you win the match.

  19. Miss Travers says:

    Well done Daniela, your instructions are very clear!
    Well done for using bossy verbs.

  20. Isabella says:

    Dear Miss Travers

    Instructions for Scrabble.

    First you give each player 5 chips with a letter.
    Then everyone checks their letters.
    After you try to make up as many words as you can using the letters you have, each time you have a turn, you get a new letter.
    Finally whoever makes up the most words gets the most points and they are the winner.
    I have a really good Scrabble board game with two different ways to play. The first version has pictures and words on and the other side of the board is blank so you can make up any words you like as long as they are in the English dictionary.

  21. Miss Travers says:

    Well done Isabella! Your instructions are very clear!
    Well done for using lots of different punctuation and bossy verbs!

  22. Isabella says:

    Dear Miss Travers

    Instructions for Scrabble.

    First you give each player 5 chips with a letter.
    Then everyone checks their letters.
    After you try to make up as many words as you can using the letters you have, each time you have a turn, you get a new letter.
    Finally whoever makes up the most words gets the most points and they are the winner.
    Remember you need to join words together.
    Remember you can’t get join two words together that don’t make sense.
    I have a really good Scrabble board game with two different ways to play. The first version has pictures and words on and the other side of the board is blank so you can make up any words you like as long as they are in the English dictionary.

  23. Miss Travers says:

    Super sentences, well done! You have used lots of punctuation and bossy verbs!

  24. Good afternoon Miss Travers!

    How to play Snakes and Ladders

    First take out the board and find the dice and the counters.
    Then put the counters on number one.
    After that the first person must roll the dice and move their counter forward.
    Next the second person rolls the dice and moves their counter forward.
    If you land on a snakes head you go down to the end of its tail.
    If you land on the bottom of a ladder you get to go up it.
    Finally who ever reaches the end of the board wins!

  25. Dear Miss Travers,

    I wrote the instructions for duck duck goose and sent it to you by email!

  26. How to do a wizard duel:
    1. First, stand about 10 meters apart
    2. Next, get your wands at the ready!
    3. Finally, say the name of a spell and wave your wand.

    List of spells:
    – Protego makes a shield which breaks after being hit.
    – Expelliarmus makes the other person drop their wand.
    – Stuepefy pushes the other person back and knocks them out.
    – Serpensortia creates a snake ? that attacks the other person.
    P.S. I did this with my brother Vincent

  27. This is how you play football.
    First, you have to put a goal in a pitch or grass. Then you have to get a ball, your mum or dad or your family has to be a goalkeeper. A goalkeeper is someone who stays on the goal so the ball doesn’t get in the goal also there are 5 players in each side. Players are people who score or defend their goal. Finally, you score a goal!
    Remember you need to use your feet, only the goalkeeper can use his hands. Remember you can’t push other players otherwise you’ll have a red car, the red car means you out and if you have 2 yellow cards your our too, if you have only 1 yellow card means you have to be careful you don’t want to get another yellow card!

  28. Miss Travers says:

    Super writing! Well done for using lots of different punctuation and bossy verbs!

  29. Melina (Mateus'mum) says:

    Hello Miss Travers, here the link that we’ve talked to you previous.
    Mateus and his father have made a gorgeous (I am a big fan!) and fun song about this difficult time. Enjoy!

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ev5ICZ2-I2o

  30. Miss Travers says:

    It’s great! Amazing work Mateus and Dad!

  31. Hello, Miss Travers!
    UNO
    First you give 7 UNO cards to each player.
    Then you put all of the other cards in the middle and turn the first one.
    The first player throws the same number or colour.
    After that each player goes one after the other until you have no cards left.
    Finally if you have one card left you say UNO!!!
    Remember you need to wait for your turn.
    Remember you can’t look at the other players cards.

  32. Miss Travers says:

    Super work! Well done! You have used bossy verbs and punctuation! I think your handwriting is very neat too!

  33. Dear Miss Travers

    Octonauts game in iPad.

    First you will need to do some tape driving. Then there is some activities to chose. Tape on it! After that you can go to another activity when you are bored with it.
    Finally have fun! Remember to fallow the activity rules! Remember to not mess up the game!

  34. Miss Travers says:

    Well done Fabi, you have used bossy verbs and lots of punctuation!

  35. Hi Miss Travers,
    I did it in my book today.

  36. Hi Miss Travers, I wrote duck duck goose. I sent a picture to you

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